Sunday, 19 April 2020
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Hi Lyem
ReplyDeleteI like your poem and the way you put a photo behind it. It made a great background. Adding a frame was a clever idea as well. What is your favourite car Lyem? I have heard you riding your motorbike around your farm? Have you been enjoying doing that? Maybe you could write a poem about your motorbike and add a photo of it.
Well done Lyem
Mrs Fisher
My favorite car is a Nissan Skyline.
DeleteYou are pumping out poems this week Lyem! Like Mrs Fisher, I like how you have a photo in the background. How do you do that? What is a spoiler?
ReplyDeleteI will send you a photo of a spoiler.
ReplyDeleteHi Lyem,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem and see that your favourite car is a Nissan Skyline, what colour would you like it?
I would like my car to be midnight blue.
DeleteHi Lyem
ReplyDeleteI like your poem Lyem, is that your favourite car in the background? I like the way your background picture, the frame and the font and colours you chose for your poem all go together so well. Great work.
Mrs Bayley