Wednesday, 29 April 2020
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Hi Lyem,
ReplyDeleteWhat a good idea to put this piece of writing up. Are you missing watching and playing rugby? I imagine many players are. Which ball skills could you practise at home? What about the idea on our slides to make a running track, time yourself. Keep a record of your times.
Hello Lyem
ReplyDeleteI really like the line in your poem 'I love soaring over the players like a hawk' That line created a very good picture in my mind when I read it.
Do you have a rugby goal post at home to practise your kicking skills?
I spotted the beautiful poppies your family created and put on your roadside fence when I went up the road the other day. Keep up your great writing Lyem.
Mrs Fisher
Hi Lyem
ReplyDeleteThis is another great poem. I wonder how long it will be until rugby starts on Saturdays, I bet you can't wait. Are you practising your kicking and passing skills at home. I like the line 'when grass scrapes me it feels nice'. Keep up the great writing Lyem. Mrs Bayley
Hi Lyem
ReplyDeleteI love your poem about a rugby ball,it really discriptive and I like how you make us feel like an actual rugby ball.i also like the similie you have used in your poem,well done.
Liam Schwartz Kokatahi school Hokitika.
Hi Liam
DeleteDo you play rugby?