Saturday, 18 April 2020
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Some bulls eat quince! I know this because we have a huge bull and he has cleaned up all the quince which fallen fro the tree. Quince are a very hard yellow fruit. If you add commas before you write next part of your line it will make your reader take a wee breath and give the line more impact. "Some bulls like to fight, some don't."
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Shaw no I didn't know that bulls eat quince.
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ReplyDeleteHi Lyem James here I like your bull poem because it has good rythem . The big piture of the bulls fighting is really cool. I liked how you started all your lines with the word some. Good job.
ReplyDeleteHi James
DeleteDo you have a bull? we have bulls their names are Spirow and Speedy.